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Ethan Venter Pages 1 and 2 by ~laughingman19:iconlaughingman19:



The Adventures of Ethan Venter

Chapter One: The Secret of Zalzey
Page One (7 Panels)

Panel 1 (wide): A large starship floats in the right corner of the panel.  Coming in from the left is a far smaller carrier ship.

Panel 2: Smaller carrier ship is docking in the port of the larger ship.  Various armed workers prepare for the prisoner to be carried out.  Smoke is coming out from beneath the ship.
SFX: Psssssssh

Panel 3: Shot is inside the cockpit of the smaller ship facing behind the pilots, so we only see their silhouettes.  The two pilots are preparing for landing.
Pilot 1: Engines set to 0, extending landing legs.
Pilot 2: All readings are normal, good for contact.
SFX: Click, Click, Beep

Panel 4: Close up on ship.  The ship has completely landed.
SFX: Thunk

Panel 5: Same as 3
Pilot 1: Ship is docked.  Preparing for departure.
Pilot 1: Ready the prisoner.
Pilot 2: About time.  This guy was giving me the creeps.

Panel 6: Shot from behind prisoner standing in front of the exit door as it opens.  We can see a great number of armed guards preparing to overtake him if he gives them a reason.

Panel 7: Close-up on the prisoner's shoulder.  One of the pilots is shoving him out a bit.  Shadow covers the prisoner's face.
Pilot 2: Come on, let's keep this moving.

Page 2 (1 panel)
Panel 1 (full page): Ethan Venter (the prisoner) as he exits the vessel.  His hands are locked together via energy-based cuffs that extend his across both of his forearms.  His long red hair is covering his face a bit, but we can still see most of it.  His expression is confident but distant.  He is wearing his Han Solo-style outfit, minus his custom blaster at his hip.  There are two armed guards at his back (the pilots) and numerous others waiting outside.  At the bottom is the title reading Ethan Venter and the Secret of Zalzey in big noticeable font.
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Author's Comments

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Well, it's been a while since I've posted anything. I was planning on keeping October as a Halloween stories month (which was originally supposed to build-up to the first page of "Ghost Camp", but that didn't really work out). However, I got a bit sick of writing stories about gruesome murders and nasty monsters (and TG witches), so, I took a little break. These are the first two pages of what I hope to be an ongoing comic called "The Adventures of Ethan Venter", the stories of the notorious space pirate (well, the infamous one anyway). Basically, I want to make it a fun adventure series similar to the old George Lucas franchises of "Star Wars" and "Indiana Jones". I'm planning on posting a pitch for it on Zeros2Heroes.com ([link]), but thought I'd try it here first. I know that nothing much has happened yet, but an actual story is coming, I swear. And I still hope to do GC ("Ghost Camp"), but after I tweak that story a lot. Enjoy.

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:iconrudedude55:
awesome, you definatly have potential as a serious comic writer

tip, link the next and previous comics in your comments of every single post, it makes them esaier to keep track of

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Eddy: ...RUN!! FOR MY NEWLY MALE LIFE!!
Elise: Get Back Here You Egotistical D***weed!!!


if you enjoyed that, then read more of my comic
here: [link]
:iconlaughingman19:
Thanks, I'll do that.

--
"Oh, what the heck! I'll Laugh anyway!" - Joker

Home of Ethan Venter: [link]

Still trying to build a fan base. Please read Ethan Venter. PLEASE :please:
:iconrudedude55:
If I remember anything else, I'll tell you

--
Eddy: ...RUN!! FOR MY NEWLY MALE LIFE!!
Elise: Get Back Here You Egotistical D***weed!!!


if you enjoyed that, then read more of my comic
here: [link]
:iconlaughingman19:
thanks.

--
"Oh, what the heck! I'll Laugh anyway!" - Joker

Home of Ethan Venter: [link]

Still trying to build a fan base. Please read Ethan Venter. PLEASE :please:
:iconrudedude55:
np

--
Eddy: ...RUN!! FOR MY NEWLY MALE LIFE!!
Elise: Get Back Here You Egotistical D***weed!!!


if you enjoyed that, then read more of my comic
here: [link]
:iconhipper-reed:
Seems intriguing :thumbsup:

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Feel free to commission me! Prices on my journal :)


My webcomics:

The Good Witch: [link]

Brainfood: [link]

Transgalactic: [link]
:iconlaughingman19:
Thanks.

--
"Oh, what the heck! I'll Laugh anyway!" - Joker

Home of Ethan Venter: [link]

Still trying to build a fan base. Please read Ethan Venter. PLEASE :please:
:iconhipper-reed:
No problemo :XD:

--
Feel free to commission me! Prices on my journal :)


My webcomics:

The Good Witch: [link]

Brainfood: [link]

Transgalactic: [link]
:iconlaughingman19:
Hey, check out the others and tell your friends. Well, please tell your friends.

--
"Oh, what the heck! I'll Laugh anyway!" - Joker

Home of Ethan Venter: [link]

Still trying to build a fan base. Please read Ethan Venter. PLEASE :please:

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