The Adventures of Ethan Venter
Chapter One: The Secret of Zalzey
Page One (7 Panels)
Panel 1 (wide): A large starship floats in the right corner of the panel. Coming in from the left is a far smaller carrier ship.
Panel 2: Smaller carrier ship is docking in the port of the larger ship. Various armed workers prepare for the prisoner to be carried out. Smoke is coming out from beneath the ship.
SFX: Psssssssh
Panel 3: Shot is inside the cockpit of the smaller ship facing behind the pilots, so we only see their silhouettes. The two pilots are preparing for landing.
Pilot 1: Engines set to 0, extending landing legs.
Pilot 2: All readings are normal, good for contact.
SFX: Click, Click, Beep
Panel 4: Close up on ship. The ship has completely landed.
SFX: Thunk
Panel 5: Same as 3
Pilot 1: Ship is docked. Preparing for departure.
Pilot 1: Ready the prisoner.
Pilot 2: About time. This guy was giving me the creeps.
Panel 6: Shot from behind prisoner standing in front of the exit door as it opens. We can see a great number of armed guards preparing to overtake him if he gives them a reason.
Panel 7: Close-up on the prisoner's shoulder. One of the pilots is shoving him out a bit. Shadow covers the prisoner's face.
Pilot 2: Come on, let's keep this moving.
Page 2 (1 panel)
Panel 1 (full page): Ethan Venter (the prisoner) as he exits the vessel. His hands are locked together via energy-based cuffs that extend his across both of his forearms. His long red hair is covering his face a bit, but we can still see most of it. His expression is confident but distant. He is wearing his Han Solo-style outfit, minus his custom blaster at his hip. There are two armed guards at his back (the pilots) and numerous others waiting outside. At the bottom is the title reading Ethan Venter and the Secret of Zalzey in big noticeable font.















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tip, link the next and previous comics in your comments of every single post, it makes them esaier to keep track of
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Eddy: ...RUN!! FOR MY NEWLY MALE LIFE!!
Elise: Get Back Here You Egotistical D***weed!!!
if you enjoyed that, then read more of my comic
here: [link]
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"Oh, what the heck! I'll Laugh anyway!" - Joker
Home of Ethan Venter: [link]
Still trying to build a fan base. Please read Ethan Venter. PLEASE
--
Eddy: ...RUN!! FOR MY NEWLY MALE LIFE!!
Elise: Get Back Here You Egotistical D***weed!!!
if you enjoyed that, then read more of my comic
here: [link]
--
"Oh, what the heck! I'll Laugh anyway!" - Joker
Home of Ethan Venter: [link]
Still trying to build a fan base. Please read Ethan Venter. PLEASE
--
Eddy: ...RUN!! FOR MY NEWLY MALE LIFE!!
Elise: Get Back Here You Egotistical D***weed!!!
if you enjoyed that, then read more of my comic
here: [link]
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Feel free to commission me! Prices on my journal
My webcomics:
The Good Witch: [link]
Brainfood: [link]
Transgalactic: [link]
--
"Oh, what the heck! I'll Laugh anyway!" - Joker
Home of Ethan Venter: [link]
Still trying to build a fan base. Please read Ethan Venter. PLEASE
--
Feel free to commission me! Prices on my journal
My webcomics:
The Good Witch: [link]
Brainfood: [link]
Transgalactic: [link]
--
"Oh, what the heck! I'll Laugh anyway!" - Joker
Home of Ethan Venter: [link]
Still trying to build a fan base. Please read Ethan Venter. PLEASE
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